Seishiro
Nymph
Watcher of the Unknown
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Post by Seishiro on Dec 30, 2005 22:17:11 GMT -5
Joy to Pain
Never to trust I run and hide From the one I love With a wing lifting Ride
Shot through the heart Stabbed in the Soul Alone in Darkness Feeling the never-ending Cold
I burn the Deed Sending my spirit under For my simple mistake Turn to a great wonder
Heed my glare Never stay staring For your eyes will change Into murder barings
With my joy There is no pain But with out my pain Joy remains with no name... -Seishiro
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Post by Aubry The Odd O.o on Dec 31, 2005 16:17:59 GMT -5
I like this a lot, especially the last stanza, it just kind of leaves you thinking.
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Seishiro
Nymph
Watcher of the Unknown
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Post by Seishiro on Jan 4, 2006 20:33:57 GMT -5
Thank you
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Post by internalpleading on Jan 14, 2006 14:57:33 GMT -5
i love these types of poems, the gloomy ones seem to have so much more meaning and emotion as opposed to the ones about rainbows and butterflies
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